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Intolerance Ch. 1 by ~animeluver17:iconanimeluver17:



                              Chapter One: Bad Behavior Is Not Acceptable

                                      ------Orochimaru’s Hideout------
                                          ------Shippuden Era------

Kabuto knocked on the wooden door in front of him. “I’m coming in…” he stated, and opened the door revealing the Uchiha lying on the bed in front of him. “Orochimaru wants to see you.”

“Why?” was the Uchiha’s answer, as he began to sit up.

“He just said that he wanted to see you. He didn’t tell me the specifics on why.” Kabuto adjusted his glasses.

“Hn.” Was all the Uchiha replied with, and stood up. He grabbed his katana that was sitting in the corner and walked out the door past the medical nin.
Kabuto turned around to watch him walk down the hall, then shrugged, and shut his door, walking the opposite way.

The Uchiha walked towards his masters room, not pleased that he was woken up from his nap. He had been tired after the training today, and just wanted to lay down, and maybe even fall asleep. ‘What the hell could Orochimaru want at freaking eleven clock at night?’ he thought, as he knocked on the door, entering.

“Ah, Sasuke-kun. I’ve wanted to speak to you.” The snake hissed

“This better be good…” the Uchiha grumbled, crossing his arms.

“That’s exactly why we’re here.” The Orochimaru replied with a hiss.

“…what?” The Uchiha asked, utterly confused.

“The attitude you have towards me. It seems as if when you grew older, you have no respect for your elders.” Orochimaru tapped his finger on his chair. “You have no respect towards me when I teach you a new technique.”

The Uchiha looked away for a moment. “What’s the point of this?” he asked.

“Sasuke-kun, you know that I will not accept such behavior from you.”

“Tch.” Was the Uchiha’s reply.

“Sasuke-kun.” The snake hissed

“What?” the Uchiha asked

“The behavior needs to stop.”

“Sure.” The Uchiha replied, turning to leave.

“You’re not done yet, Sasuke-kun. I need to ensure this.” He hissed.

The Uchiha backed away a little. “No, you don’t.”

“Take off your shirt.” He commanded. “And bring it to me.”

The Uchiha grumbled and removed his shirt.

“Strip to your pants , Sasuke-kun.”

The Uchiha flushed. “M-My pants?” he asked. ‘Damn, did I just stutter?!’ he scolded himself. Great, now he seemed like some scared little kid. He slowly did so though, and walked up to Orochimaru, giving him his clothing.

Orochimaru set the shirt, purple rope, and the blue cloth aside. “You’re katana.” He held out his hand. Sasuke slowly gave it to him, and crossed his arms, a little confused. “You see that desk?”

“Yes.” Sasuke replied, a little ticked that he was almost naked.

“Go put your hands on it.” He hissed

Sasuke cocked an eyebrow. “What?”

“Do it.” He commanded

The Uchiha turned around and walked towards the desk, now a little frightful. Hesitantly, he put his hands on the desk, leaning over it as his arms held him up. He looked down at his arm guards, trying to keep his mind on something else. He heard his master stand up, and walk over to him.

The floor creaked. He got closer, and closer, until he was standing over Sasuke. “Huh, I’m surprised you did what you were told, Sasuke-kun…” he hissed slightly. “The sooner you accept that you’ve been a naughty boy, the sooner the ‘punishment’ will be over.” He hissed

Sasuke growled slightly at how Orochimaru was treating him. “Orochimaru, stop treating me like a damned k-..” he was cut off by a sharp smack to the rear. His eyes went wide. Oh hell no. “Did you just…?” Sasuke managed out when another smack was landed.

“Quiet, Sasuke-kun.” He brought down his hand again. It echoed in the room. Sasuke kept his face glued to the desk. Another swat, then another.

  “Would you…a-ah!” he bit down on his lip, flushing more as the swat fell. He tried concentrating on the pattern of the table as Orochimaru brought down his hand again.

After a few more swats that counted, Orochimaru stood the Uchiha up. “Go back to your room.” He commanded.

Sasuke ‘hmphed’, and gathered his stuff, walking towards the door.

“Ah, ah, Sasuke-kun. Don’t you have something to say to me?”

Sasuke growled. “Thank you for your lesson, sir…” he spat, as if those words were poison.

Orochimaru grinned as Sasuke walked out the door. “I don’t think that’s be the last time I’ll have to teach Sasuke-kun a lesson…” he licked his lips.
©2008-2010 ~animeluver17
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Author's Comments

I got bored, and decided to right something along the lines of what might have gone on at Orochimaru's base when Sasuke was sixteen. This is chapter one. Should I conitnue, or not? ;D And no, this is NOT yaoi.

:salute: Kerushii-danna

(c) Sasuke Uchiha, Orochimaru, and Kabuto belong to Masashi Kishimoto

Chapter 2-[link]
Chapter 3-[link]

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:iconsasukeswolfbabe:
lmao

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Marcus: CAROL!THROW THE SPIKE BOMB!!!!!*runs past the small wall*
Me: *throws it at the wall 2 feet infront of me and Ryan*
Ryan:...Worst throw ever...and of all time.*facepalm*
Me: Not my fault.The wall got in my way.
Marcus+Ryan: *facewall*
:iconanimeluver17:
XD What do you think?

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"Kitzuki Uchiha! O.O WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?!"
"Oh, shut it, Kerushii, you whinning little bitch"
"You little...!" Grabs spoon.
"NO, NOT THE SPOON!" Cowers in fear.
"Too. Late."
"NOOO!!!"
"Welcome. to. HELL!" :pissed:
:spank:
:cries:
:iconsasukeswolfbabe:
funny as hell.XD Can't wait for the rest!!!

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Marcus: CAROL!THROW THE SPIKE BOMB!!!!!*runs past the small wall*
Me: *throws it at the wall 2 feet infront of me and Ryan*
Ryan:...Worst throw ever...and of all time.*facepalm*
Me: Not my fault.The wall got in my way.
Marcus+Ryan: *facewall*
:iconanimeluver17:
:giggle: Thanks!

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"Kitzuki Uchiha! O.O WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?!"
"Oh, shut it, Kerushii, you whinning little bitch"
"You little...!" Grabs spoon.
"NO, NOT THE SPOON!" Cowers in fear.
"Too. Late."
"NOOO!!!"
"Welcome. to. HELL!" :pissed:
:spank:
:cries:
:iconsasukeswolfbabe:
:iconoaml: no prob.

--
Marcus: CAROL!THROW THE SPIKE BOMB!!!!!*runs past the small wall*
Me: *throws it at the wall 2 feet infront of me and Ryan*
Ryan:...Worst throw ever...and of all time.*facepalm*
Me: Not my fault.The wall got in my way.
Marcus+Ryan: *facewall*
:iconanimeluver17:
XD

--
"Kitzuki Uchiha! O.O WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?!"
"Oh, shut it, Kerushii, you whinning little bitch"
"You little...!" Grabs spoon.
"NO, NOT THE SPOON!" Cowers in fear.
"Too. Late."
"NOOO!!!"
"Welcome. to. HELL!" :pissed:
:spank:
:cries:
:iconsasukeswolfbabe:
:iconiminsaneplz:

--
Marcus: CAROL!THROW THE SPIKE BOMB!!!!!*runs past the small wall*
Me: *throws it at the wall 2 feet infront of me and Ryan*
Ryan:...Worst throw ever...and of all time.*facepalm*
Me: Not my fault.The wall got in my way.
Marcus+Ryan: *facewall*
:iconanimeluver17:
:iconwhutplz:

--
"Kitzuki Uchiha! O.O WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?!"
"Oh, shut it, Kerushii, you whinning little bitch"
"You little...!" Grabs spoon.
"NO, NOT THE SPOON!" Cowers in fear.
"Too. Late."
"NOOO!!!"
"Welcome. to. HELL!" :pissed:
:spank:
:cries:
:iconsasukeswolfbabe:
:iconomgkawaiiplz:

--
Marcus: CAROL!THROW THE SPIKE BOMB!!!!!*runs past the small wall*
Me: *throws it at the wall 2 feet infront of me and Ryan*
Ryan:...Worst throw ever...and of all time.*facepalm*
Me: Not my fault.The wall got in my way.
Marcus+Ryan: *facewall*

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